A short story with a message!
Situation (In Black)
Boy Thinking (In Blue - Italics)
Girl Thinking (in RED - Italics)
Girl Talking (in RED)
Boy Talking (in Blue)
Phone Ringing – Unknown
number on a Friday evening
Time: 7:00 PM
Boy in Office Campus wrapping
up the work on a Friday evening!
Girl in Terrace
Boy: Hello
Girl: Hello, how are you?
Boy: I am good, who is this?
Girl: My name is Radha
Boy: Do I know someone
named Radha – Pause – NO
Boy: Sorry, I did not get who is this…
Girl: Do not act, you know me
Boy: Seriously I do not remember
Boy: Do I know her? No
Girl: Do not try fooling by saying
you have never heard my name!
Boy: Girl, I have not heard your name
Girl: You are a close friend of
Krishna right?
Boy: Friend yes, close friend – you can call it that way
Girl: Does he not work with you and
you both were roommates right?
Boy: Yes, that is true
Girl: Have you ever heard my name
from him?
Boy: He keeps taking lot of girl’s names, I do not remember
this name though
Girl: And you call such a person as
friend, what kind of person are you?
Boy: Look girl, I do not know who you are and how can you
even comment about my character and personality!
Girl: You want to talk about
character and defend yourself and your friend on this?
Boy: Is this a crank
call – it cannot be since she is quoting names that I know. Let us see, the voice is good ;-)
Boy: Can I know why you called me since this is going
nowhere?
Girl: So you want to know why I
called you?
Boy: Yes obviously
Girl: Did you pay 25,000 to your
friend Krishna 3 months back?
Boy: Yes, that is between me and him
Boy: Is she going to
ask for money on loan? I do not even know who this is, I should check with
Krishna on this..
Girl: Do you know why he needed that
money so urgently?
Boy: I do not ask why my friend’s need money, I just give if
I trust them and if I have it. And he returned the money as well..
Girl: So, they can ask money for
anything and you will give! <<Voice
raised>>
Boy: Girl, I do not know who you are and I have no clue why
you are asking such questions and becoming emotional!
Girl: Oh, you want to know why I am
emotional! <>
Boy: Up to you to tell or not tell, I want to know why you
called me?
Girl: Let me tell you what that
money did which you so open heartedly gave it to your “friend”!
Boy: Please enlighten me <>
Girl: It was used to pay for an
abortion for a girl whose innocence he used and destroyed!
Boy: Hmm..
Boy: Really, that is
not good – should I ask more info on this, may be not. How should I respond and how do I react!
Girl: Are you wondering why I called
you?
Boy: Yes <> <>
Girl: Krishna quoted you as one of
his best friend and he is the one who gave me your number for Emergency..
Boy: Really, why did
this idiot do this!
Girl: He also obviously told me who
gave him the money in that urgency. <>
Boy: Something is not
right…
Girl: And I called you to let you
know that I am currently in Fourth floor of my PG.
Boy: OK!
Girl: I wanted to tell you that I am
going to jump from here to relieve myself.. <>
Boy: What the F…. Why
me…What should I do now..Should I cut the call? No, I cannot – I will probably
be the last person whom she has spoken.
Police will catch me for no fault of mine.
Boy starts sweating, picks up
a Cigarette and lights. Nobody around in
the smoking zone – Looks for someone to talk and get guidance.
Can he cut the call – NO!
Should he continue – NO!
How did this happen – NO
IDEA!
Why did she call him – NO
CLUE!
What should he do next –
ABSOLUTELY NO CLUE!
Does he know her – NO!
Should he get involved – NO!
Should he not get involved –
NO CHOICE!
Starts
Panting heavily, pulls in the Cigarette with higher intensity. The Phone line is still on. Girl is crying on the other side <> Boy
got engaged a week back, what will happen to that if he gets associated with
such a thing?
Boy: Look girl, I am
getting a call. I need to take this call
and will call you back as soon as I have cut that call. I need to be sure that
call back will be picked up and by you – Do we have a deal?
Girl: <<Still
crying>>
Boy: Do we have a deal?
Girl: Yes and only if you call me in
5 mins. After that, I cannot guarantee that I will pick up!
Boy takes care of the other
call from his fiancé and lets her know that he will talk to her tomorrow. He is
in a priority issue which he needs to take care immediately…Obviously he cannot explain much!
Boy starts calling Radha It is only 2 mins, she should pick up –
Will she pick up, Please pick up!!!!
Girl: Hello <>
Boy: Hey <> Plan B for the boy, if the girl
does not pick up the call – he needs to call Police!
Girl: Tell me
Boy: Girl, so you have made up your mind to jump and lose
your life?
Girl: What do you think, I have not
decided?
Boy: I do not think so!
Girl: Hmm…now you will tell me what
to do? <>
Boy: Do we have an agreement that I have no clue what
happened between you and Krishna?
Girl: You are claiming that…
Boy: Do you believe me or not?
Girl: I do not believe anyone after
what I have gone through…
Boy: Look, I have explained you and my surprise from your
call is genuine. Did you even get any
other thought from what I have spoken till now?
Girl: No, but how does that matter?
Boy: Are you willing to listen to me?
Girl: For some reason YES..
Boy: <> I cannot keep this phone down in any
case. Let me make her talk while I
think!
Being Genuine and Confidence in the tone always helps!
Boy: I am seriously naïve to your relationship which you
know by now. I know it is difficult, but
can you please talk me through on when you met Krishna. How this happened and
how did you end up like this?
Girl: Are you trying to kill time by
going through something which I do not want to talk?
Boy: You have anyway decided to commit suicide, what
difference will it make by extending by 5 mins?
Girl: Hmm..
Boy: I will at least know what kind of friend I have and
more about him.
Girl: I met him through FB, we got
to know each other well enough to meet in person. Once we met in person, we started hanging out
together. We met in coffee shops
initially then went for a movie. You can
call it dating. I felt something for him
and I believed it was the same for him considering the amount of time he spent
with me in person as well as on phone!
Boy: Really, you can
get close to people like this…In India really! Dude, get back to thinking – You
do not have lot of time. This is not
customer call where you can buy time….
Girl: He asked if we can go out to
Coorg for 3 days so that we get to know each other more. Initially I hesitated,
but I agreed.
Boy: You agreed?
Girl: Yes I agreed since I trusted
him….
Boy: You trusted him without knowing anything about him?
Girl: Yes!!! Now you are saying it
is my fault?
Boy: No, I am just surprised how you can trust someone
without knowing about him. I cannot!
Girl: I am not you!!!
Boy: Do not take it wrong, but TRUST is a very big word to associate with someone whom you hardly know!
Girl: Yes, I realize now. But, what is the point?
Boy: Hmm…And then what happened? Did you go?
Girl: Yes we went and that is when
all non-sense happened?
Boy: You mean the mistake?
Girl: Yes
Boy: Girl, where are you from?
Girl: North India, Why?
Boy: Down south and being from South, It is difficult to
imagine..hence the question
Girl: Oh, now you want to generalize
what I did based on the part of India?
Boy: No, all I said is – I cannot imagine.
Girl: It is the same everywhere in
India
Boy: Hmm…after that did you break up?
Girl: NO, we did not. We continued the relationship. He was good until I asked him to get married.
Boy: You asked him to get married? What did you know about him to get married?
Girl: What is wrong in asking to get
married?
Boy: Nothing wrong. I
do not know how you look, but I know he is smart.
Girl: Should I send you my pic?
Boy: Yes, that is the last thing I will need on my
mobile! I already have an incoming call
for more than 30 mins and an outgoing call now going on. Knowing the fact that you are going to commit
suicide, I am thinking what will happen to my future. All I will need is a photo of you in my
mobile so that I do not have any defense when Police catches me.
Girl: I did not realize!
Boy: Yeah, why will you realize? You are going to anyway
die, you will need other people also to suffer when you die right?
Girl: No, that is not the intent.
Boy: Then, what do you think is your calling me going to
serve?
Girl: Hey, I did not realize this
will happen..
Boy: Leave it, you do not realize anything. Otherwise, why would you be in such a
situation?
Girl: What do you mean?
Boy: Do not trigger me, you will not have answers to the
questions I ask.
Girl: Go on, let me try
them…consider it as a dying woman’s wish!
Boy: Yeah, it will help in making my outgoing call
longer. Nothing else will happen.
Girl: I can call you back
Boy: As if that will help!
Girl: Go ahead and ask your
questions. Who knows you might not get a
second opportunity?
Q1 Boy: OK, why did you call me?
Girl: To tell you what happened and
how “good” a friend you have
Q2 Boy: Do I know you or do you know me?
Girl: We do not know each other
Q3 Boy: Now going back to Q1, why did you call me?
Girl: I wanted to tell someone who
knows him that he is bad. Hence, I
called you.
Q4 Boy: Once that is done, what did you expect from me?
Girl: To tell people what he is
Q5 Boy: Did you think a close friend will go around telling
everyone how bad his friend is?
Girl: Any logical person would..
Q6 Boy: How do you think someone will trust a completely
unknown person (like you) against his friend?
Girl: You will know once I die…
Q7 Boy: And how will that help anyone?
Girl: I did not call to help someone
Q8 Boy: Back to Q1, why did you call me?
Girl: I have already explained
Q9 Boy: No, you have not..why did you call me?
Girl: OK, it was a mistake that I
called you!!!
Boy: Now, that is
something to work on….
Boy: Do you know your one mistake is costing your LIFE now –
that is if you commit suicide
Girl: There is no doubt in that
Q10 Boy: So now your second mistake is going to cost someone
else’s LIFE. Do you realize that?
Girl: Yes Krishna’s and that is what
I want
Q11 Boy: How do you think it will impact his LIFE?
Girl: Because Police is going to
catch him
Q12 Boy: Yeah right, they will catch him. How will they know him?
Girl: Because you are going to tell
him…
Q13 Boy: Vow, so just to be a messenger of your voice. I need to get caught in all these. That is the price I am going to pay for a
friend in need! Do you think this is correct?
Girl: It is not, but I am not in
mood of thinking what is right and what is wrong…
Q14 Boy: Do you know there are other ways to do this right?
Girl: Like not jump from building?
Now, you are going to advise on how I should die? <<Sarcastic>>
Boy: No, I am not experienced on that to tell you about
options.
Girl: Then?
Boy: You could have created your case before you die without
calling me.
Girl: Like?
Q15 Boy: You could have written a death note, Have you
thought about it?
Girl: Do you think I had time to
decide what to do before I die? You are
talking as if this is an event! <>
Boy: No, but this is
the biggest and irreplaceable event of your LIFE. You should have planned it better!
Girl: You are taking this as a joke,
right?
Boy: No, I am not..probably you are. Definitely not me, since I am shit scared
about what is going to happen if you die… <>
Girl: Yeah, I am joking! <>
Boy: Sorry, I need to talk about a proverb here.
Girl: Hmm..
Boy: Can you clap with one hand?
Girl: No, I need two hands
Boy: If you cannot clap with one hand, how did all these in
your LIFE happen. Don’t you think you
were the other hand in assisting the clap?
Girl: I know where this is heading…<>
Q16 Boy: May be, but I still do not understand how it is one
person’s fault when two people must be involved to create the problem?
Girl: He can cheat and the person
who is cheated and is a victim becomes equally responsible?
Boy: The way I look at it, you allowed him to cheat. Knowingly or unknowingly – Only you
know. Who am I to judge?
Girl: Good Dude. You think you are good at this right?
Boy: About what?
Girl: About talking people through
and protecting your friends?
Boy: No, concepts
without logic does not convince me.
Hence digging into it!
Girl: I am not a case study!
Boy: Who said you are not? I am an optimist, I see
opportunity in every trouble. Unlike
you, I see LIFE in and after every
trouble.
Girl: I am not as great as you are <>
Boy: I agree to this point!
Girl: Well at least you agree to
something!
Boy: As I said earlier, I agree to logic…<>
Girl: Hmm..you are egoistic aren’t
you?
Boy: Well, people call me confident, perfectionist,
Humorous. This is the first time someone
has called me Egoistic!
Girl: You are, you cannot agree to
someone else.
Boy: I just agreed to your point since it made sense.
Girl: Yeah,
that is right <>
Boy: Let me tell you the reason why you called me since you
could not answer me?
Girl: Yes, go ahead…
Boy: You were not sure on what to do in your LIFE. You wanted to talk to a stranger who does not
know you but knows Krishna.
Girl: Hmm..Hmm..And then? <>
Boy: I do not think you are going to commit suicide, do you
know why I think like that?
Girl: Really, you think that way!
Boy: Yes, someone
planning to commit suicide does not plan. They die unlike you who is
calling me to yell out your frustration.
Girl: Is that what you think?
Boy: It is not what I think, this is what is going through
your mind. Do you know it requires
utmost guts to commit suicide and that guts do not sustain for more than few
seconds? You either commit suicide
in those seconds, else you will not.
Girl: Is this an attempt to convince me not to die?
Boy: What do you think I will gain or lose if you die or not
die?
Girl: Maybe you will not get caught
with Police and save your close friend as well
Boy: Even if I get caught with Police, I guess I have enough
proof to claim that I do not know you.
Considering what will happen to Krishna, why do you think I will
care? I do not even think what will
happen to you! You said Egoistic, I will tell you what other people tell me-
They tell me I am selfish.
Girl: So, you do not care even if a
girl dies because of your friend?
Boy: I do if I know her.
I should if she is my relative. I will break apart if she is my sister
or daughter. What is my relationship with you?
Girl: Hmm..<>
Boy: Are you thinking about your parents?
Girl: Hmm..<>
Boy: Did you talk to them before you called me or are you
planning to talk to them after this call?
Girl: I did speak to them
Boy: Did you tell them what happened or give any hint that
they will not have you in their LIFE from tomorrow?
Girl: No, NO, NO, NO
Boy: Have you even imagined what will happen to them and
what they will go through if you do what you are planning to do?
Girl: No and I do not want to
imagine
Boy: You should. You
have time to think and decide on your LIFE because of someone whom you know for
1 year. But, You will not think about
your parents who have brought you into this world and gave your LIFE?
Girl: Hmm..<>
Boy: They have every
right to be given time. They own your
LIFE since they gave you this.
Girl: Hmm..
Boy: Do you think you will not have anyone else in your LIFE
and I do not think the mistake that has happened needs this big price to be
paid? May be for you, but not for your
parents. Your attempt for making Krishna pay the price might be far less than
the price that your parents and people close to you have to pay.
Girl: Do not make me feel guilty
Boy: You have to
Girl: Hmm..
Boy: Dying is not your wish, it is wish of someone
else. Do not make hasty decisions
because of which many people close to you will have to suffer.
Girl: I agree
Boy: Vow, Did I really
manage this? I still need to continue and convince her completely..
Boy: Good, do you trust your parents?
Girl: Yes
Boy: Do you think they will agree to what you are trying to
do?
Girl: Which parents will agree?
Boy: Why do you think they will not agree?
Girl: Because they LOVE me
Boy: Exactly, do you think you LOVE Krishna more than
parents’ LOVE for you?
Girl: NO, it is not even comparable
Boy: All I am requesting you to do is – Rethink what you are
doing
Girl: Hmm..Yes
Boy: There is LIFE
after every setback and mistake. That
is LIFE. It is Hope, Dream, Love, people – mix of all.
Girl: I agree
Boy: Everybody does mistakes, they learn, they correct and
the LIFE is good if you do not repeat.
Girl: I am confident that I will not
go through this again
Boy: Ever?
Girl: Yes
Boy: Do you trust me?
Girl: Yes, will you still be a
friend of Krishna after what I have told you?
Boy: Listen, the word Krishna should not come out of your
mouth and should not exist in your brain or heart anymore.
Girl: Hmm..
Boy: Look ahead, look at people who care for you, who matter
for you. Do not look at people who does
not qualify to this.
Girl: Yes
Boy: Again, do you want to still commit suicide?
Girl: No, I do not want to ..
Boy: Will you ever change your mind again? What will you do
if you get this thinking again?
Girl: I will not change my
mind. Even if it happens, I will call
you
Boy: NOOOO, I cannot go through the POLICE stuff again!
Girl: Sorry
Boy: You can obviously call me, but
if you get this thinking again – You need to think about people close to
you. Parents, Close friends, Siblings
etc..
Girl: Agree
Boy: Did you notice you are now talking in a normal tone?
Girl: Yes
Boy: Are you still in the terrace?
Girl: Yes, do you want me to go
down?
Boy: No, It is October month. It is cool and breezy in Bangalore - Do you feel it?
Girl: Yes, now I do.
Boy: Enjoy the surroundings, look at things and feel things that
makes a positive difference.
Girl: Agree
Boy: Can I tell you something to be very honest?
Girl: What is that?
Boy: I was shit scared when we started the call. I had no clue what to do and I was actually
cursing my fate on this.
Girl: Haha <>
Boy: You have such a good laugh, I will tell you another
honest thing..
Girl: What is that?
Boy: Your voice is very sweet, which is the first thing that
came to my mind when you called me.
Girl: Are you flirting with me?
Boy: No way, I am getting engaged next week which is why I
was more scared and that is the emergency call I had to make!
Girl: Really, I am sorry – I did
this to you. Please apologize to her on my
behalf.
Boy: Sure will do <>
Girl: Will you invite me for your
wedding?
Boy: If you are still alive, YES
Girl: Now that is a bad joke
Boy: I am glad that you called it a joke. Do you know what time it is?
Girl: Around 10 PM, why?
Boy: Did you have dinner?
Girl: No
Boy: Foolish question I guess, somebody who wants to die –
why will they eat?
Girl: We are not joking on this
topic anymore…
Boy: Sorry, Sorry. I have not had my dinner and my parents
are waiting at home.
Girl: Where are you?
Boy: In office, I was about to leave. But …
Girl: Apologize again!
Boy: No problem, it was worth the time spent.
Girl: Big Thank You for bearing with
me and for getting me out of this foolishness..
Boy: I am glad, I had this opportunity.
Girl: Yeah right, you look at every
challenge as opportunity.
Boy: Yes and that is how everyone should look at challenges
Girl: Will you meet me tomorrow for
coffee?
Boy: No, my priority is to meet my fiancé
Girl: Oh yeah, carry on.
Boy: Can I now confidently keep the phone?
Girl: Yes you can.
Boy: I would still read the morning newspaper and watch
morning news..
Girl: Oye
Boy: Sorry…Bye
Girl: Bye
Boy: All the Best
Girl: Wish
you the same.
Thoughts, Quotes, Learnings…
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